Girls, pls help with my profile for a dating site.What should I change before posting? Your opinion?

Hello! I am here to make a friend who will become my soulmate.I will leave the physical description to the photograph. I am told I am intelligent and am considered humourous and witty. I love to travel, especially to the UK and Europe, and never shy away from a good bed and breakfast. Any ideas for destinations? I love all animals and especially dogs, play tennis, go biking and like going for a stroll and eating well. Be it at a chic place or the local Indian place. You’d have to ask if you want to know my favourite place though! I will show you that one in person. I am known to enjoy and sample different cuisines, collect rock (the more obscure kind) and Classical CDs (not all recordings are equal) and discuss films or world affairs. I am personable and looking for someone who is aware of her environment. I am not looking for someone who is exactly like me, but I believe couples should share each other’s goals.

Hello!

I am here to make a friend who will become my soulmate.
> you’re heading towards marriage before you know her name. this may scare her or only get you people over the age of 40

I will leave the physical description to the photograph.
>good

I love all animals and especially dogs, play tennis, go biking and like going for a stroll and eating well. Be it at a chic place or the local Indian place.
> Proper grammar is important. You’re failing here.
I love all animals, especially dogs. I play tennis, I bike ride and hike. I enjoy dining out – be it at a chic place or a local Indian dive.

You’[ll] have to ask if you want to know my [favorite] place though! I will show you that one in person. I am known to enjoy and sample different cuisines, collect rock[s] (the more obscure kind) and Classical CDs (not all recordings are equal [too pompous... get rid of this]) and discuss films or world affairs [this too]. I am personable and looking for someone who is aware of her environment. I am not looking for someone who is exactly like me,

but I believe couples should share each other’s goals.
>but am looking for someone who shares similar life goals.

You have grammatical errors, and are writing British English style… depends where you are posting. (I am not very good at grammar, so can’t correct it for you… but errors don’t look good in personal ads).

Good luck finding your mate!